I got this in my e-mail today and have to wonder at his Staff ? Read carefully maybe you will see what I am talking about. -------Original Message------- Date: 5/13/2009 Subject: Health care news worth sharing
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You are receiving this email because you signed up at WhiteHouse.gov. My staff and I plan to use these messages as a way to directly communicate about important issues and opportunities, and today I have some encouraging updates about health care reform.
The Vice President and I just met with leaders from the House of Representatives and received their commitment to pass a comprehensive health care reform bill by July 31.
We also have an unprecedented commitment from health care industry leaders, many of whom opposed health reform in the past. Monday, I met with some of these health care stakeholders, and they pledged to do their part to reduce the health care spending growth rate, saving more than two trillion dollars over the next ten years -- around $2,500 for each American family. Then on Tuesday, leaders from some of America's top companies came to the White House to showcase innovative ways to reduce health care costs by improving the health of their workers.
Now the House and Senate are beginning a critical debate that will determine the health of our nation's economy and its families. This process should be transparent and inclusive and its product must drive down costs, assure quality and affordable health care for everyone, and guarantee all of us a choice of doctors and plans.
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Health care reform can't come soon enough. We spend more on health care than any country, but families continue to struggle with skyrocketing premiums and nearly 46 million are without insurance entirely. It is a priority for the American people and a pillar of the new foundation we are seeking to build for our economy.
We'll continue to keep you posted about this and other important issues.
Thank you, Barack Obama
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Hello, I went looking for info after receiving the same email, hoping to determine whether or not the email was legit. I read the email twice, but didn't catch anything odd. What is it that you noticed that makes you question his staff?
ReplyDeletewell basically the use of grammar (I know funny enough coming from me huh?) but as a person who does read more than most I was wondering about the word usage of transparent and for that matter inclusive... also relying to heavily on the word and this is what comma's are made for . I know I'm guilty too, however if the White House Staff are not going to bother with looking or sounding professional or at least well educated what does that say about us as a people or our government as they represent us?
ReplyDeleteyes I know I have more mistakes in my little comment here than in the whole of the e-mail I, however, will admit it's pure laziness in general as well as being under educated . I have some college experience but not as much as I would have liked. I Expect More from the people in charge and their Staff! that's what disappoints me. The people in charge should always be better educated and less lazy than those they seek to rule.
to me using the words transparent is admitting they are pulling the wool over my eye's or are at least trying to..and inclusive just another way of saying "members only" ...
Anyhow thank you for taking the time to ask me it is appreciated. I can only grow as a person when asked by another why I think my opinion is what it is sometimes my opinion's hold up and have a merit of their own sometimes I am forced to concede the contest and alter my opinion based on a better argument. LOL but hey that's life.
Transparent and Inclusive are Obama Administration shtick words. I think I hear them in every speech or published statement that comes out of the Administration.
ReplyDeleteLOL it figures why do politicians still think the voting public are dumb enough to fall for catch phrases?
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